The Cheshire Cat

Exciting, good flow. A really enjoyable read. One of the first poems i've read on this site, and one of my favorites. Where everything is all right— The opposite of ...

Loving the story so far. I like how it turned out to be a man reading a story to his two kids, cute idea, and very intruiging. I'm definatly looking ...

Wow, this was an amazingly powerfull story, full of a deeper meaning as well. I really truly enjoyed reading this. I loved how the daughters roles were switched. And the ...

First off, let me just say how great this looks. The first sentence was arranged really well, it caught my attention and drew me in. I'm really looking forward to ...

Excellent job, loved the flow of the writing. The story has me intrigued already. I know what you mean about writing seeming so short when you post it, then when ...